I was able to write almost 2 pages in my second version of my story.  I decided to combine first and third person almost as soon as I started writing.  My initial scene is written in first person and any flashbacks that might happen in third person.  I think the flow is good for right now, and I was able to comfortably fit more emotion into the first scene than when I wrote it in third person the first time. 

I'm going to continue on this track for a bit, and then switch back over to the first version I was working to see how that goes.  I think I'm going to work on both for the time being, but eventually pick one to finish.  Or maybe I'll finish both...  Who knows :-p